Sunday, January 10, 2010

157 Words

I am over my statement of purpose 1,000-word-limit by 157 words.  My second to last cut felt good.  It felt like I was trimming excess and my writing was becoming more clear.  But the last cut just about killed me.  I felt like my voice was being lost.  I felt like important things were being left out.  I felt like my statement was weakening.

I don't think I can cut anymore, and I don't even know if my statement really addresses what it is supposed to address. 

I have lost energy for this, and I have to move on to the edits on my essay anyway so I can get something in tomorrow (the application deadline). 

I don't even know where to begin with my essay.  Nothing feels right.

I want to puke.

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